So I decided to film a passport being scanned, showing a beam of light passing under the passport. I think that the dark, shadowy clip with one piece of light running through fits the dark themes of the rest of opening titles, as well as clearly indicating the idea of someone manipulating their identity.
This also allowed me to fill a gap of footage in the sequence, as where the last cast member is introduced, the footage remained as clouds from this moment until the logo appeared. Now, by replacing a long use of cloud footage with new passport footage, the pacing of the titles remains consistent instead of slowing down, and the clips continue to vary.
Original footage of my passport |
Fine Cut Version Two: Before |
Final Cut: After |
This last change to my titles has proved to be the effective finishing touch that the sequence needed, I feel extremely satisfied with the final result.
The Identity Opening Titles
this is really good now. if i was to make one critical comment - the bit with Michael B Jordan, doesn't have any other overlay -its just clouds - and as that's like the final title one it makes him (his name) stand out more.. could there be an image to blend in there??
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